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Title: Heteronormativity, Gender Construction, and Non-Verbal Signalling in Intercultural Communication Situations (A Comedy)
Author: mad_maudlin
Recipient: vipersweb
Pairing: John/Teyla, various others
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~35,000
Spoilers: Through early S4
Warning: Mensa AU
Summary: In which Teyla may be plotting something, Keller may be delusional, Ronon may be cheating and John may in fact be the girl. No pudding cups were injured in the production of this fanfic.

A/N: This was the FIC THAT WILL NOT END so, Vipersweb, I hope you don't mind the length. Special thanks go out to C, my beta; M, my idea-off-bouncer; and L, who is many things, but most relevantly here, my source for all things Mobile Suit Gundam-related. All my information about MRE menus is from MREinfo.com.

Heteronormativity, Gender Construction, and Non-Verbal Signalling in Intercultural Communication Situations (A Comedy)

Please note, due to the length of this story, it is being hosted offsite.


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Jan. 10th, 2009 08:52 am (UTC)
my secret pairing of glee! So glad you wrote this. :)
Jan. 10th, 2009 12:58 pm (UTC)
Glad that you liked it!
Jan. 12th, 2009 04:32 am (UTC)
Oh wow, oh wow. I adored this. I literally was laughing like a loon at bits. I could completely see how each of the characters were changed by the AU and still themselves. This was the best thing I've read in ages.
Jan. 12th, 2009 06:45 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Jan. 12th, 2009 05:49 am (UTC)
Hee! Oh, this was brilliant.
Jan. 12th, 2009 06:45 am (UTC)
Jan. 12th, 2009 11:11 am (UTC)
This is absolutely awesome. I've only seen like three eps of SGA, but I read fic when a story or a good-sounding rec crosses my Flist, and I'm very glad icarusancalion recced this. :D I love your John and his total lack of any kind of social skills, your quiet-hiding-awkward Teyla, the whole Ronon triangle thing, the knitting, the pudding, and all the little bits that made me giggle while I was reading this. Great job. :D

Jan. 12th, 2009 11:40 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Wow, now I can say that people who don't even like SGA liked it...
Jan. 12th, 2009 05:57 pm (UTC)
My roommate just knocked on my door to ask if I was okay, because I was kind of making sobbing noises. They must think I'm insane.

This was, like, entirely made of awesome.
Jan. 13th, 2009 04:40 am (UTC)
I hope they were good sobs...? :-) Thanks for reading!
Jan. 13th, 2009 03:01 pm (UTC)
I enjoyed the writing, I enjoyed how neurotic John was, I ESPECIALLY like how Runner!Teyla was portrayed. I ususally avoid het fic like the plague, but this one I'm probably going to read over and over.
Jan. 13th, 2009 03:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I love being the exception to somebody's rule. ;-)
Jan. 15th, 2009 12:23 am (UTC)
i love every single part of this! really great job -- completely hilarious, too awesome for words.
Jan. 15th, 2009 04:53 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Jan. 15th, 2009 03:05 am (UTC)
Hilarious, creative and sweet. I can't even tell you how many times I cracked up. The fern incident in particular had me in stitches. And I love John's mom. And Sumner's knitting. And Rod's Rodness. And Katie's prudishness. And the explanations for the badassness of Teyla's friends. So, everything, really. Thanks for sharing this!
Jan. 15th, 2009 04:49 am (UTC)
Thank you for commenting! The fern incident was a spur-of-the-moment addition to make that segment just that much more screwy.
Jan. 16th, 2009 06:23 am (UTC)
I don't think I've enjoyed a story quite this much in way too long a time. :) I loved the character voices, the romance, and I laughed which is awesome.
Jan. 16th, 2009 09:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Jan. 17th, 2009 01:49 am (UTC)
This is now one of my favorite Mensa!verse stories. Perhaps my single favorite. Yes. Quite fun, and loved the sprinklings of Rodney and our John in this John, and the sprinklings of our Ronon in Teyla. And poor misunderstanding Keller, hee.
Jan. 17th, 2009 04:40 am (UTC)
Thanks! I love playing around with Rod's vague descriptions of the Mensaverse team. And Jennifer just needed someone to explain things to her. :-)
Jan. 17th, 2009 07:16 am (UTC)
Ok. I don't even really get this fandom, and was linked here by the friend of a friend of a friend.

But your story. Is freakin'. FANTASTIC. I loved the humor and the characterizations and the attempts at flirtation.

Also, it's totally quotable.
"Hi. Dr. John Sheppard. I like football, Ferris wheels and anything with an explosive yield over two hundred kilotons."

You're terrific.
Jan. 17th, 2009 08:02 am (UTC)
Thanks! Although the line you quote is a play off one of the lines in the real!series pilot, not my own creation.
Jan. 17th, 2009 05:53 pm (UTC)
Here on an insta-rec from amothea and omfg. I've only gotten as far as "It was probably about the third time that they nearly woke up the Wraith that the Athosian council decided to adopt the expedition, sort of like how John's math teachers used to make him sit next to the slow kids" but I had to stop right away and come leave feedback because -- because -- because this is awesome! Every single word. Awesome. And my day is crazy busy and so is tomorrow and then it's the work week and I figured there was a chance that if I didn't get my feedback in now, there wouldn't be any room for mine when I finished the story.

I love that it's set in Rod!verse, and I love what you're doing with that 'verse, the way the details give a terrific view of the whole without ever being expository. This is something I struggle with in my own writing, and I'm just really impressed by how skilled you are with this.

Also, the character voices are terrific. They're different but still the same -- different circumstances forge different people but still recognizably the people we love from the show, it's perfect how you manage it.


I am crazy in love with this story. *goes back to continue reading*
Jan. 17th, 2009 06:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you! If that's how you review the first couple pages, I'm almost afraid of what you'll say when you're done. ;-)
(no subject) - zillah975 - Jan. 18th, 2009 05:15 am (UTC) - Expand
Jan. 18th, 2009 04:51 am (UTC)
That was amazing. I normally don't like het, but the way you dealt with the AU team was amazing and John and Teyla's relationship just so sweet. I think I wouldn't mind seeing more Ronon/Melena/Jennifer action either.
Jan. 18th, 2009 10:39 am (UTC)
Thanks! I don't normally write much het either, but I had a blast with this one.
Jan. 20th, 2009 11:17 pm (UTC)
I think it's incredible how you took Rod and figured out all the other characters from just meeting him. John was adorably funny and Rod was perfect Rod. And it was hilarious.
Jan. 21st, 2009 05:30 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Feb. 3rd, 2009 06:08 pm (UTC)
I've told you how much I adore it but I had to rec it on stargateficrec so others can enjoy it as well. Thanks for sharing.

Feb. 4th, 2009 08:10 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you for the rec!
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