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Fic: Mended (McKay/Sheppard, PG)

Title: Mended
Author: sheafrotherdon
Recipient: xparrot
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Summary: Eshba lets out an unsteady breath. "The virus has come more than once. Each time it changes, each time it takes more. We cannot let this knowledge die with us, yet we cannot find those to whom it must be passed."

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melagan
Dec. 28th, 2008 01:06 pm (UTC)
I was completely drawn into this- worried for Rodney, and comforted by John's arms around him ♥
elfin_saltwater
Dec. 28th, 2008 10:37 pm (UTC)
Oh this is really lovely - the pure worry (and love) driving John throughout this is just palpable. And Rodney seeking the comfort of John. Well done!
argosy
Dec. 29th, 2008 05:42 am (UTC)
Oh, I loved the tangibleness of John's worry. Lovely!
sundara
Dec. 30th, 2008 03:33 pm (UTC)
This is such a Pegasus scenario...glad it turned out alright. Poor Rodney, and John who worried so palpably for him. Very good read.
tropes
Dec. 30th, 2008 03:49 pm (UTC)
I meant to leave a comment earlier but I just wanted to tell you that I loved this. I think it's really beautiful. :)
thegrrrl2002
Dec. 30th, 2008 05:49 pm (UTC)
Oh, so lovely! I love how John can offer such comfort to Rodney, and they way he hurts when Rodney is hurting--aw, so much love! Fabulous story.
ex_kisa_haw
Dec. 31st, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
Oh, this is so lovely and angsty-sweet. What a really lovely story.
porntestpilot
Dec. 31st, 2008 03:22 am (UTC)
This is beautiful, I loved reading it. Thank you!

And god, that's so horrifying what they did to him!
less_star
Jan. 1st, 2009 06:53 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was beautiful; both the plot and the feeling.
wildestranger
Jan. 1st, 2009 07:31 pm (UTC)
This is lovely, and your John is most delightful.
beadattitude
Jan. 2nd, 2009 05:43 pm (UTC)
::presses heart:: That John offers up his own stories as comfort. So lovely.
juniperphoenix
Jan. 2nd, 2009 06:10 pm (UTC)
This was beautiful. I love your atmospheric descriptions of the village, John's mixture of gentleness and anger, and the real importance and urgency of preserving a culture's memory.
danceswithgary
Jan. 4th, 2009 02:11 am (UTC)
The thread of storytelling is wonderful in this, along with John's frustrated need to protect.
fish_echo
Jan. 4th, 2009 06:23 am (UTC)
Mended (SGA, McKay/Sheppard)
I teared up at this-- I think mostly at the understated-but-deeply-caring moments. You've shown relationships that are real and believable and I rather love this to pieces. Just, I think I'll go read some crackfic right now, something that tears less at my heart-strings. And I love that Rodney volunteered to be a memory-carrier and that even afterwards he didn't regret it.
fish_echo
Jan. 4th, 2009 06:24 am (UTC)
Re: Mended (SGA, McKay/Sheppard)
(Here via xparrot's rec)
springwoof
Jan. 5th, 2009 04:40 am (UTC)
very nice. well-crafted complex characters with no clear villains, and the guys & their relationship was lovingly portrayed. I liked the scene where John is weighing doing the good deed versus the responsibilities of his command. It's unfortunate that the nasty thing the Ga'gaan's did is going to make him less likely to be moved to help anyone else in the future...
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