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Title: Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
Author: sholio
Recipient: argosy
Pairing: McKay/Keller
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 33,000 *koff*
Warning: Contains some relatively mild horror-movie-esque imagery and creepiness
Spoilers: Set post-Enemy at the Gate, potential spoilers for all aired episodes.
Disclaimer: Not mine, do not own.
Author's Notes: Thank you to astridv for the excellent (and fast!) beta.

Summary: John is dealing with his teammates' love lives just like any other emotional issue: by ignoring the situation and hoping it goes away. But when a mission gone wrong traps John, Rodney and Jennifer a thousand feet beneath New Lantea's ocean -- injured and out of touch with Atlantis, with the clock running down and a mysterious enemy in pursuit -- they're either going to have to work out their differences ... or die trying.

( Devil and the Deep Blue Sea )

Comments

wildcat88
Dec. 18th, 2009 04:39 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed this! Your character voices were wonderful, and I loved your insights into John - his views of coupledom, his struggle with finding his place amongst teammates who were in relationships, his desire to do the right thing if he just knew what it was. You made McKay and Keller's relationship believable and let it support the story instead of overwhelm it. You also made the h/c part of the plot instead of the crux of the story. Well done!
sholio
Feb. 11th, 2010 08:43 am (UTC)
Thank you very much; I'm very happy that so many gen people enjoyed the story. :) I do think that maintaining a balance is key to making a story come alive -- between characters, between relationships, between plot elements and so forth!

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