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Title: Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
Author: sholio
Recipient: argosy
Pairing: McKay/Keller
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 33,000 *koff*
Warning: Contains some relatively mild horror-movie-esque imagery and creepiness
Spoilers: Set post-Enemy at the Gate, potential spoilers for all aired episodes.
Disclaimer: Not mine, do not own.
Author's Notes: Thank you to astridv for the excellent (and fast!) beta.

Summary: John is dealing with his teammates' love lives just like any other emotional issue: by ignoring the situation and hoping it goes away. But when a mission gone wrong traps John, Rodney and Jennifer a thousand feet beneath New Lantea's ocean -- injured and out of touch with Atlantis, with the clock running down and a mysterious enemy in pursuit -- they're either going to have to work out their differences ... or die trying.

( Devil and the Deep Blue Sea )


Dec. 27th, 2009 07:37 am (UTC)
This was a cute story. I like that you dealt with the fact that Sheppard is alone with everyone else paired up and how he's having difficulty dealing with it. It would be interesting to have seen what would have happened on the show, though I think they would have ignored it.

I like Keller in this a lot and that you kept her at the skill level she is - that is, she's a good Doctor, but not very skilled in the field b/c of lack of experience. I like the bits and pieces you show of Rodney and her relationship. Though you used Teyla very little, where and how you used her was to great effect. Like the end quite a bit, especially since you brought in a bit of Athosian culture.
Feb. 11th, 2010 08:07 am (UTC)
Thank you very much; I'm glad you enjoyed this! One of my regrets with this story was that I couldn't give Teyla and Ronon much to do; it was long enough as it was. *g* But I really enjoyed playing with the interpersonal dynamics between the characters -- it's much more interesting when everyone is not getting along than when they all are!


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