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Title: Unexpected Consequences
Author: goddess47
Recipient: omg_wtf_yeah
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: Oh so very NC-17
Word count: 27,500
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine... sigh
Author's Notes: The request included "John!hookerfic that's more Pretty Woman than My Own Private Idaho. But the ending always has to be happy." That caught my imagination and hope I did it justice.

Thanks to fenchurch1 and mezzo_cammin for their help and feedback. Any mistakes are mine alone.

The Mondrian is a real hotel but amenties and services are pure invention; while I've briefly been to LA most of what I know is Google-fu. Some dialogue taken from Gateworld transcript for The Rising - Part 1

Summary: Leave a message at the tone. "Fuck you, Larry, get a secretary," Rodney sighed tiredly into the phone. "I hope you get this, I'm coming to LA tomorrow – Thursday – so I'll be in your office Thursday afternoon. See you then."

( Unexpected Consequences )

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sexycazzy
Dec. 17th, 2010 03:48 pm (UTC)
Wow - this is really awesome!

and the last line - OMG - made me cry but in a good way!

Loooooooved it!
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:22 am (UTC)
Many (late) thanks!

Yeah, that last line came from no where but it fit so well... and it leaves me the possibility of a sequel...

darkmoore
Dec. 17th, 2010 07:54 pm (UTC)
Awwwwww! Loved this. Especially that John was not in fact, a hooker at all. Very nice!
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:23 am (UTC)
Many (late) thanks....

Yeah, John's too smart (in my head anyway) to really be a hooker but it was fun to play with him!
rabidfan
Dec. 17th, 2010 07:55 pm (UTC)
Very nice retelling of the beginning of the expedition. Plus? Since I've got about 8,000 words of Hooker!John working myself I have a soft spot for it! Well done.
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:24 am (UTC)
Well, then, I have to watch for your hooker!John fic..... ;-) It is a fun place to play!

Many (late) thanks!
shetiger
Dec. 17th, 2010 08:02 pm (UTC)
This was a really good read. The kind that makes me feel like I'm on Christmas vacation for real. :)
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:24 am (UTC)
A little fluff is always fun, isn't it?

Many (late) thanks!
fenchurch1
Dec. 17th, 2010 11:27 pm (UTC)
I like the sound of Auntie Nathalie! The true heroine I feel! No really - I enjoyed this again and I like the extras - thank you for making me a part of this (quote from Muppet Christmas Carol!!).
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:25 am (UTC)
::grin::

Glad you liked how it turned out and Auntie Nathalie is quite the character!

Thanks!
taste_is_sweet
Dec. 18th, 2010 05:59 am (UTC)
Lovely, fun, sweet story. I really enjoyed it.
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:25 am (UTC)
So glad you liked it...

Many (late) thanks!
omg_wtf_yeah
Dec. 18th, 2010 06:14 am (UTC)
Oh my gosh! Wow! You really went above and beyond on this! I'm so pleased and happy! Thank you so much, Santa. It was wonderful! ♥♥♥
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:26 am (UTC)
And you're welcome... I knew the Pretty Woman thing had already been done much better than I probably could do it, but the hooker!John part of your request really caught my imagination.

Thanks for a great prompt!
(no subject) - omg_wtf_yeah - Jan. 6th, 2011 06:52 pm (UTC) - Expand
saffronhouse
Dec. 18th, 2010 03:35 pm (UTC)
Oh, nice! I really liked the way this world keeps getting bigger and bigger, from stressed outRodney hiring an escort to stepping through the stargate!

(and Fleinhart's cameo made me smile and smile)
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:28 am (UTC)
Larry and Rodney *had* to know each other. ::nods firmly:: People that brilliant always end up in similar places...

Many (late) thanks!

aqualegia
Dec. 19th, 2010 02:12 pm (UTC)
A fascinating AU of Rising which I couldn't stop reading until I had finished it.
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:28 am (UTC)
That's always the nicest thing... when it's compelling enough to draw you in.

Many (late) thanks!
pingback_bot
Dec. 21st, 2010 01:12 am (UTC)
SGA SANTA
User argosy referenced to your post from SGA SANTA saying: [...] happens when John and Rodney don't have to hide their relationship anymore. Unexpected Consequences [...]
argosy
Dec. 22nd, 2010 03:24 am (UTC)
mmm,that was a fun story to get lost in for a while! I really enjoyed it.
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:29 am (UTC)
Oh, I'd love to get lost with those boyz.... LOL

Many (late) thanks!
dossier
Dec. 24th, 2010 01:26 am (UTC)
thank you, that was a fun read!
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:29 am (UTC)
So glad you liked it!

Many (late) thanks!
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goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:29 am (UTC)
Awww.... thanks and so glad you liked it!
danceswithgary
Jan. 5th, 2011 03:47 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed this and was rooting for John to be something more...and then he was! :-D
goddess47
Jan. 6th, 2011 01:30 am (UTC)
The John in my head can pretty much do anything.... ;-)

Many thanks!
(Anonymous)
Jan. 13th, 2011 06:08 pm (UTC)
Oh this was great! I loved that twist in the plot where John wasn't really a hooker. I do so hope that you write more in this verse. I'm off to find more of your works! Thanks for a great read.
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